Rank: Newbie
Joined: 5/20/2005
Posts: 26
Location: USA
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Rank: Martian Estate Agent
Joined: 9/14/2003
Posts: 3,358
Location: United Kingdom
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Great work, made me smile. Very smooth. Try adding audio.
Full On Design
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Rank: Larger than Life
Joined: 11/15/2003
Posts: 1,649
Location: United Kingdom
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Not to bad at all!
Few pointers, perhaps speed it up a little, doesn't flow fast enough to be believabe.
Also, why not finish with the board landing on the guys head? bit of a splatter doesn't hurt no body (apart from the stick)
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Rank: L1: Chatty
Joined: 3/20/2004
Posts: 59
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meh its ok, but it looks like you tried TOO hard, and that just made it worse, everything is too slow, the blood would be good if it wasnt in slow motion. mabey if you up the frame rate it will look better. but doing more frames just makes me able to see more mistakes you made, so id stick to no more than 25 fps unless your very confident. But definatly dont make that many frames on a frame rate that low, it just doesnt look good. but its better than alot ive seen and if you could make it longer im sure you have potential
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