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Posted: Tuesday, November 23, 2004 8:40:21 PM

Rank: The Empty One

Joined: 8/18/2003
Posts: 4,176
Location: USA
Here's a poem that I wrote randomly during school today.

"Why do you stay here?" she asks
Of the one of her dreams
The one of the world
That's not what it seems
He speaks no words
Yet she can hear him say
"Although I may leave
The feeling will stay."

She cries, though unheard
She feels her heart stained
She knows the words are true
The feeling yet remains
She asks, "What can I give
What price can I pay
For you to leave
And let not the feeling stay?"

He laughs at her plea
He savors her pain
There is no price to be paid
The feeling will remain
She is foolish to believe
Foolish to pray
That he will leave
And the feeling won't stay

She screams in silence
She cries in fear
She feels in her mind
That something stays here
She bows her head
To quietly say
"Why can you not leave
And let not the feeling stay?"

The deceit withdraws
The answer is clear
That something about her
Makes the feeling stay here
"Even though I hear you
And understand what you say
I still must leave
And the feeling must stay."

"Demon," she speaks
"The one of what I fear
Listen to what I say
Understand what you hear
You give me no answer
But there must be something to pay
To make you leave
And let not the feeling stay."

"You don't realize
You can't have what you ask for
There is only the feeling
And nothing more
Although you ask
There is nothing to pay
To make me leave
And let not the feeling stay."

She closes her eyes
She gives in to the answer
She finally knows
Why the feeling stays with her
He turns away from her
There is nothing more to say
She watches him leave
And knows that the feeling will stay.
rogem002
Posted: Sunday, November 28, 2004 2:52:29 PM

Rank: Martian Estate Agent

Joined: 9/14/2003
Posts: 3,358
Location: United Kingdom
i fink u worked very hard on dat good work

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